Arron 100 word challenge

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  1. Mrs Boydon says:

    What an exciting piece of writing Arron – sleepovers, portals, flying cars! You’ve obviously used your fantastic imagination – well done.

    Next time, try and squeeze some more description in by using adjectives and adverbs to help create the mood and atmosphere. I think you could have made the attic sound really spooky – which words would help you to do that, do you think?

  2. Mrs LeDrew says:

    Your story sounds very exciting. Great imagination!

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