Sufyan’s 100wc

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  1. Tiana says:

    Brilliant! When you were describing how warm the water was, you could have put it into 1 sentence. Instead of “The water was warm. It was as warm as a volcano.” you could have done “The water was as warm as a volcano”. Other than that, your story is great.

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